Nicely done Bryan, all the basics are there, as you self admit volume pedal is a bit overdone. A tip - try playing without it for a while, let the notes ring out, don't try cutting them off, you will be amazed how much control you can develop by pick and bar work.
We all overdo the volume pedal at times specially in the early days.
A few pitch issues on some of the moves, but a great effort and all going in the right direction, I enjoyed it.
Lets hear more.
Dave.